Hi,

thanks for the review. I discussed this briefly with Ghyslain and we
agree with your comments.

Regarding the interop-difference from 4995, we'll add a sentence to the
introduction as suggested.

Is it sufficient to update both this and the IANA allocation during
AUTH48 as we will anyway update the acknoledgement section to add the
CDR from the working group last-call?

/Kristofer


Brian E Carpenter wrote:

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-rohc-rfc4995bis-01.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2009-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2009-12-04
IESG Telechat date: 

Summary: Almost ready
--------


Major issues:
-------------

In the IANA considerations we find:

   The following profile identifiers have so far been allocated:


      Profile Identifier    Usage                      Reference
      ------------------    ----------------------     ---------
      0x0000                ROHC uncompressed          RFC 4995

But this document obsoletes RFC 4995. Surely the reference should be
updated to point to this document?

Minor issues:
-------------

I am surprised there is no clear indication where the substantive change
to
RFC 4995 lies. If I was an implementor, I would want to know what I have
to
fix. A note in the introduction that the substantive change is in
section 5.2.4.1 would do it. (I had to use rfcdiff to find it.)

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