I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-josefsson-kerberos5-starttls-07.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 14-Dec-2009
IETF LC End Date: 24-Dec-2009
Summary: The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC.
It came as a surprise that a protocol that is used to enhance the
security ends up saying that protocol does not require clients to verify
the server certificate. It sounds strange, but I think it is well justified.
Nits/editorial comments:
- Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: SRP
- Section 5, 6th paragraph:
s/a list that map realm names/a list that maps real names
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BR,
Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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