Hi, version 04 of this draft addresses all my comments below.
Thanks, Gonzalo Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-bryan-http-digest-algorithm-values-update-03.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email protected]> Review Date: 9 December 2009 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: Abstracts should not contain references because it should be possible to read them as stand-alone documents. The note in the second paragraph of the Introduction states that this is unrelated to HTTP authentication. Adding an extra sentence explaining what this relates to instead would be useful. Section 4 does not mention the addition of two new algorithms. Thanks, Gonzalo
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