Joe Abley wrote:
Hi Vijay,
Thanks for your review.
Joe: Sorry for the late reply -- got sidetracked on
other things. More inline.
I am happy to work with you on section 1 to make it more readable,
but I'm not particularly happy with your first suggested replacement,
as sent. Should we take this off-line and wordsmith?
Sure; I'll send you a private email and we can report to
Gen-ART once we are done word-smithing.
Thanks,
- vijay
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