I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-nm-framework-04 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2010-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2010-02-08 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: Minor issues: Section 2.2 seems like a lot of complexity (and acronyms) just to talk about the internal architecture of one box, and to define interfaces that won't ever be standardized. Nits/editorial comments: In one place in section 2.2, EMF is expanded to "Element Management Function." In the Terminology and elsewhere, this is "Equipment Management Function." _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
