I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-mediactrl-mixer-control-package-10.txt
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard but I have a few editorial comments. Minor ===== * The term "crop" used in section 4.2.1.4.2.1. is counter-intuitive. Crop usually means cutting away part of the picture to get the desired size and not stretching/shrinking it. Can you change the name to dual-view-resize or something similar? Editorial ========= * Section 4.2 penultimate paragraph s/operaton/operation/ * Section 4.2.1.4.1 s/partipicant/participant/g * Section 4.6.6 s/formated/formatted/ Thanks Suresh
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