I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-ethernet-traffic-parameters-10.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 18-Feb-2010
IETF LC End Date: 22-Feb-2010
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- On section 8, the text reads:
"This document introduces no new security considerations to either
[RFC3473]".
The presence of the word "either" hints for a second reference,
besides RFC 3473. Is this second reference missing, or does the word
"either" need to be removed?
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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