I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-autoconf-adhoc-addr-model-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2010-02-27 IETF LC End Date: 2010-03-05 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: (I added a '?' for suggestions) - 1 page 3: etc. -> etc., ? - 1 page 3: i.e. -> i.e., - 4 page 4: please expand "L2" - 6.1 page 5: trey can not -> they cannot ? - 6.2 page 6: length /32 -> 32 bit length ? - 6.2 page 6: please expand "DAD" - 9 page 7: RFC 4593 is Informational and in Normative References (I don't say it is bad, just it is questionable) Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
