On Tue, 2010-03-09 at 23:42 -0500, Suresh Krishnan wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for > draft-ietf-sip-domain-certs-05.txt
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard but I > have a few comments. > > Minor > ===== > * This document refers to TLS 1.2 but refers to extensions from TLS 1.1. > I think it is better to replace the reference to RFC4366 with a > reference to draft-ietf-tls-rfc4366-bis-06.txt> even though it means > calling out a downref. We're aware of that problem and are working with the Security Area ADs to decide on the right thing to do. > Editorial > ========= > > Please fix these typos. > > * Abstract > > s/cetificates/certificates/ > > * Section 7 > > s/entitites/entities/ > > * Section 7.1 > > s/extentions/extensions/ > > * Section 7.2 > > s/Implemenations/Implementations/ > > * Section 8.1 > > s/imlementation/implementation/ > > Thanks > Suresh Thanks for your careful reading... I've corrected those in our working text. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
