I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-turner-encryptedkeypackagecontenttype-algs-01.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2010-04-02 IETF LC End Date: 2010-04-28 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Ready, one clarity issue. -------- Minor issue: ------------ 2. EnvelopedData EnvelopedData supports a number of key management techniques. Implementations that claim conformance to this document MUST support the key transport mechanisms and SHOULD support the key agreement mechanisms. These sentences are hard to decode for an outsider. There seem to be at least 3 missing references. Which "key transport mechanisms" and which "key agreement mechanisms" does it refer to? Does it just mean "as defined below" or is there more to it than that? I would also repeat [RFC5652] after "EnevelopedData" for complete clarity.
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