Enrico, Thanks for you review. Responses inline.
spt Enrico Marocco wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-keyprov-symmetrickeyformat-07.txt Reviewer: Enrico Marocco Review Date: 2010-04-26 IETF LC End Date: 2010-04-26 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Note: I'm not an expert in the area, hopefully more expert eyes have looked and are going to look at the ASN.1.
I did and I believe the Shepherd did too, but we've have some tweaks along the way so we'll need to double check this before the very end.
Minor nits: Section 1. Introduction, second para: s/uses cases/use cases/
Fixed.
Section 3.3.4. Key Usage, "Verify" bullet: move the period after the parenthesis.
Fixed.
Section 4.1. AES Key Encoding, first para, second sentence: OLD The first octet of sKey SHALL become the key byte in AES labeled index 0 in [FIPS197] SHALL be the first octet of sKey, and the other key bytes SHALL follow in index order. NEW The key byte in AES labeled index 0 in [FIPS197] SHALL be the first octet of sKey, and the other key bytes SHALL follow in index order.
An IESG reviewer also pointed this out, I'll make sure to fix this.
Section 4.2. Triple DES Key Encoding, second para: "msb" acronym is used without definition. It could be easily defined at the end of the previous sentence, where it is expanded.
Fixed.
Section 5. Security Considerations, first para: s/[CMS]/[RFC5652]/
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