I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avt-rtcp-guidelines-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2010-05-06 IETF LC End Date: 2010-05-10 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 8 page 15: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: please introduce abbrevs here (SSRC, SR, RR) - 3 page 4: same for SSM and XR - 3 page 4, 3.1 page 6, 5 page 11 (twice), 6 page 15 (twice): e.g. -> e.g., - 3.1 page 5: I propose: 0.5 ... 1.5 -> from 0.5 to 1.5 - 3.1 page 6: kb/s -> kbits/s - 3.1 page 6: please introduce the MCU abbrev here - 3.3 page 8: quintuple -> 5-tuple ? - 4 pages 9 and 10, 5 pages 12 and 13: acknowledgements -> acknowledgments - 4 page 9: implosion -> explosion (BTW implosion makes sense only in building destruction and some nuclear weapons, and is pretty hard, fortunately for the second item :-). - 9.1 page 15: RFC1925 is informational so to put it as normative is perhaps a bit excessive... - 9.1 page 16: please move RFC5117 to informative references Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
