I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-rosen-urn-nena-02.txt
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational
RFC but I have an issue that you may consider fixing.
Minor
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* The introduction section of this draft reads like an advertisement and
I feel that it is not appropriate for an RFC to contain such text.
e.g. "NENA serves as a link in the delivery of emergency services. 9-1-1
has, throughout its evolution, become recognized as an asset of the
North American public."
While this might be a fact (I am pretty sure of it), this has got
nothing to do with why the URN is being registered.
I suggest rewording th whole section 1 to the following.
"The National Emergency Number Association (NENA) is currently in the
process of setting standards, processes and procedures for the use of an
IP-based Emergency Services IP Network (ESInet) for all public safety
entities in North America. Some of the solutions being developed by NENA
require XML namespaces that are managed so that they are unique and
persistent. To assure that the uniqueness is absolute, the registration
of a specific Uniform Resource Name (URN) [RFC2141] Namespace ID (NID)
for use by NENA is required. This document defines and registers such a
namespace."
I leave it up to your (the author and the shepherd) discretion if you
want to incorporate my comments.
Thanks
Suresh
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