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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avt-rapid-acquisition-for-rtp-15.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20100925 IETF LC End Date: 20100928 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: if RTP is a well known abbrev RTCP is not, but IMHO if someone reaches it (s)he should already know it... - 1 page 4 (first line and others): The receivers -> Receivers ?? - 1 page 4: I am not convinced 'all of the Reference Information' is really correct English ?? - 3 page 8: the CNAME abbrev must be introduced - 6.2 3 page 20: RTP-RX -> RTP_Rx ? - 7 page 28: figure 4 has 'SSRC of media source' but the text has 'SSRC of media sender', this is very confusing! - 9 page 41: NAPT abbrev must be introduced (BTW NAT is well known) - 9 page 41: why only UDP is considered? DCCP is supposed to be a good transport for RTP even in presence of NAT - 9 page 41: BTW the PCP WG should add another port forwarding config way (but it was created far after the document) - 14.1 page 53: some normative references seem to be more informative, for instance RFC5226 / BCP26 A+ francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
