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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-reset-03
Device Reset Characterization
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 27-Nov-2010
IETF LC End Date: 07-Dec-2010
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as an
Informational RFC
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
Is there a reason that section 4.1.1.1 on reset of a single-RP device
refers to simple removal and re=insertion, without explaining the
caveats that section 4.1.2 (line card removal and re-insertion) provides
about using a method to avoid having the human time for the removal and
reinsertion have a significant effect on the operation?
Also, should the same caveat not be applied to section 4.3.1 on Power
Interruption? There seems to be an implicit assumption that the human
operation will be sufficiently fast, and the recovery sufficiently slow,
that the human element does not matter. At the very least, it would
seem that this should be articulated.
Nits/editorial comments:
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