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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-ip-options-05.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2010-11-29
IETF LC End Date: 2010-11-30
IESG Telechat date: (if known)
Summary: The documetn is ready for publication as a proposed standard RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- Please expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: MPLS
- This is also very personal, but I think the presence of the word
"Requirements" in the title of the draft may mislead the reader, thinking
that this document just contains a collection of functional requirements
but does not affect a protocol implementation. Since the draft proposes
real actions at LERs, then I would suggest to remove "Requirements for"
from the title.
Other than that, the document looks good.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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