On 12/06/2010 11:54 AM, Eric Johnson wrote:
Hi Vijay,
Thanks for your review! I was just wondering if I should be "ping"ing
anyone about it.
Eric: For that I have no idea. You may want to check with your
co-authors regarding the edits and with Alexey on next steps since
this is an AD-sponsored draft.
I'm more than happy to post a new draft with some edits, but I have
questions below:
Please see inline.
OK. What if I change this:
The required particles in the JMS URI are the scheme name ("jms"), the
variant identifier, and the <jms-dest> portions. The three recognized
variants (<jms-variant> above) are "jndi", "queue", and "topic". The
<jms-dest> portion identifies the JMS destination object in a way that
is determined by the particular variant. Both the variant, and the
jms-dest portions of the URI are case-sensitive.
To this:
"The required portions of the syntax include the terminal of "jms" for
the URI scheme name, the <jms-variant> element to indicate the variant
of the scheme, and the <jms-dest> element, which identifies the
destination based on the chosen variant. For the <jms-variant> element,
this document defines three values: "jndi", "queue", and "topic". Both
the <jms-variant>, and the <jms-dest> elements of the URI are
case-sensitive.
I think it is fine with one caveat: the last sentence can simply
state that "All the terminals resulting from <jms-variant> and
<jms-dest> production rule are case-sensitive."
* S4.4 -- I am not sure why the second paragraph starts with
an underline character: _Warning_. This will probably render using a
different font, etc. on a browser, but in the printed page it will
loose its meaning. Maybe best to s/_Warning_/Warning/
This is how XML 2 RFC appears to render something with emphasis. Looks
fine in the HTML rendering. Can you suggest an alternate construct I
could put in the XML form, rather than the current form?
<spanx style="emph">Warning</spanx>
Ah, OK. I was not aware of the <spanx> element in xml2rfc. If
that's what it does then that's what it does.
Thanks,
- vijay
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