Hi Jari, I looked over the new version and it addresses my comments. Thanks for the quick turnaround.
Cheers Suresh > -----Original Message----- > From: Jari Arkko [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Monday, December 27, 2010 4:59 PM > To: Suresh Krishnan > Cc: General Area Review Team; > [email protected] > Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of > draft-arkko-ipv6-transition-guidelines-12.txt > > Thank you Suresh for these comments. I have addressed all of > them in -14. > > Jari > > Suresh Krishnan kirjoitti: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for > > draft-arkko-ipv6-transition-guidelines-12.txt > > > > For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. > > > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last > Call comments > > you may receive. > > > > Summary: This draft is well written and is ready for > publication as an > > Informational RFC but has some minor issues that need to be fixed. > > > > Minor > > ===== > > > > * Section 2 > > > > NAT-PT was defined in RFC2766 and not in RFC4966 (which > deprecated it). > > > > Suggest replacing > > > > NAT-PT: refers to a specific, old design of a Network Address > > Translator - Protocol Translator defined in [RFC4966]. > > > > with > > > > NAT-PT: refers to a specific, old design of a Network Address > > Translator - Protocol Translator defined in [RFC2766] and > deprecated > > due to the reasons stated in [RFC4966]. > > > > > > * Section 3.1 > > > > " For instance, a service provider network might stop > providing IPv4 > > service within its own network, while still allowing its IPv6 > > customers to access the rest of the IPv4 Internet > through overlay or > > proxy services." > > > > IPv6-IPv4 translation could also be used as a sunsetting mechanism. > > Could you include this as an option. e.g. > > > > " For instance, a service provider network might stop > providing IPv4 > > service within its own network, while still allowing its IPv6 > > customers to access the rest of the IPv4 Internet > through overlay, > > proxy, or translation services." > > > > Thanks > > Suresh > > > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
