I have reviewed the updated version of this document. All recommended changes have been made and I do not see any issues with the additional text added to the document.
Best regards, Kathleen -----Original Message----- From: Sean Turner [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Tuesday, November 09, 2010 8:04 PM To: Moriarty, Kathleen Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Re: Gen-ART review for draft-turner-md2-to-historic-05 Kathleen, Thanks for the review. I'll fix these up in the next version. spt On 11/9/2010 11:42 PM, [email protected] wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-turner-md2-to-historic > Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty > Review Date: November 9, 2010 > IETF LC End Date: November 9, 2010 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that > should be fixed before publication. > The intent of this draft is to retire the MD2 message digest algorithm and > providing the justification. This draft also requests that RFC 1319 be moved > to historic. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > Section 4: Impact of Moving MD2 to Historic > The first bullet in the subsection "Regarding PS RFCs:" starts with Further, > however it is the first bullet so I recommend changing it to read: > "MD2 support in TLS was dropped in TLS 1.1" > > Section 7: Recommendation > I recommend breaking the first paragraph into two sentences as follows: > > Despite MD2 seeing some deployment on the Internet, this > specification recommends obsoleting MD2. MD2 is not a > reasonable candidate for further standardization and should be > deprecated in favor of one or more existing hash algorithms (e.g., > SHA-256 [SHS]). > > > I apologize for the slow turn around on this review. Work has been hectic! > > Thank you, > Kathleen > > > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
