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Document: draft-igoe-secsh-suiteb-02.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 10-Jan-2011
IETF LC End Date: 18-Jan-2011
Summary: The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments: idnits reveals a few nits:
- The document lacks an IANA section. If there is no action for IANA, the
section should say that, e.g., including something like "This document
has no actions for IANA." The author should consider whether this
document requires an IANA action or not.
- The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even
if it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords and a reference to RFC 2119 exists
in the Normative References section.
- There are a number of unused references, including: AEAD, RFC4250,
SSH-Auth, GCM.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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