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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-groves-eccsi-00.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20110113 IETF LC End Date: 20110118 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: Almost Ready Minor issues: - The signature length in 3.3 is 2N+4 when computation and examples give 4N+1? - There is no justification that if s' is too big to fit within and N-octet integer then q - s' is always small enough. (BTW I know the justification so it works but currently the specification is a bit distressing to implement :-) Nits/editorial comments: - 1 page 3: e.g. -> e.g., - 1 page 3: minimised -> minimized - 2 page 4: KPA -> KMS (in "that there is one KPA, one user" ...) - 3.3 page 6: possible typo: 2N+4 -> 4N+1 - 4.1 pages 6 and 7: 'B' should be listed here - 4.1 page 7: standardised -> standardized - 6 page 11 (twice): authorised -> authorized - 7.2 page 13: KPAK second line needs re-indent - 7.2 page 15: I can check Sig length is N+N+(2N+1)=4N+1 - Acknowledgement -> Acknowledgment (i.e., American spelling please :-) Regards [email protected] PS: my dictionary doesn't like 'affine' which seems correct for me (BTW draft-mcgrew-fundamental-ecc-04.txt uses the word 'affine' too). _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
