Thanks for the review! The only non-nit issue:

> Section 7:
> An earlier section mentions the capabilities to have role based access to the 
> tool for types of access.  Since this document will later be used for an RFP 
> to create a tool, do you want to list out the security requirements that 
> would have to be met in that proposal?  This may or may not be desired as 
> this section usually refers to the security of a protocol, etc.


I don't think this is desired because those will be defined somewhere else, 
probably not in the statement of work.

--Paul Hoffman

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