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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsecha-protocol
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 9 April 2011
IETF LC End Date: 13 April 2011
IESG Telechat date: 28 April 2011
Summary: The document is ready with nits.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
When describing 4-byte/8-byte fields, it would be good to state that
values are in network byte order.
10. Interaction with other drafts
I think it woul be better to name this section "... other documents" or
"... other extensions", because the title will get dated once these
other documents are published.
[...]
To conclude, session
resumption and SA counter synchronization after failover are
mutually exclusive.
Does "mutually exclusive" means that they must not be used together?
[...]
So, Redirect and SA counter synchronization
after failover are mutually exclusive.
As above.
Best Regards,
Alexey
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