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Document: draft-ietf-genarea-datatracker-iana-rfced-extns-01
Review Date: 2011-04-22
IETF LC End Date: 2011-05-02
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
2.1. IANA Information To Be Added to the Datatracker
Currently, IANA reviews and touches documents at 4 different stages
in the process from I-D to RFC for IETF stream documents: Last Call,
IESG Review, Document Approval (for publication), and RFC
Publication. Most of these state changes and issues are not captured
in the Datatracker. For IRTF and INDEPENDENT,
Nit: I think adding "Stream Submissions" after the "INDEPENDENT" would
add a bit of clarity.
the IANA review
process begins when IESG Review is requested.
ID-nits reports:
Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist :
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** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one
being 11 characters in excess of 72.
Miscellaneous warnings:
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== Line 164 has weird spacing: '...ts have been ...'
I believe both of these issues can be fixed by the RFC Editor.
-- The document has a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but was first
submitted on or after 10 November 2008. Does it really need the
disclaimer?
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