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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-location-conveyance-08 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: June 17 2011 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: June 23 2011 Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: Section 3: therefore any of the diagrams the SIP intermediary receives the SIP request is potentially an LR SHOULD BE: therefore in any of the diagrams the SIP intermediary that receives the SIP request is potentially an LR Section 3.3: in order to be location recipient SHOULD BE: in order to be a location recipient It could be the case that a SIP intermediary which does not perform location-based routing but does care when Alice includes her location; SHOULD BE: It could be the case that a SIP intermediary which does not perform location-based routing does care when Alice includes her location; _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
