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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pcn-sm-edge-behaviour-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 201106017 IETF LC End Date: 20110610 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: None Minor issues: - more than 5 authors - the American spelling for behaviour is behavior - there is a problem with security considerations (5.8 page 16 and 6 page 17) Nits/editorial comments: - Toc page 2 and 8 page 17: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgements - 1.1 page 6, 3.2.3 page 8, and etc: signalling -> signaling - 3.1 page 7, 4 page 13, and etc: collocated -> co-located? - 5.2.1 page 14: tunnelled -> tunneled, signalled -> signaled - Authors' Addresses page 19: add missing Country Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
