Please see attached review.





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Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-tp-gal-in-pw-01.txt 
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2011-09-03
IETF LC End Date: 2011-08-26
IESG Telechat date: 2011-09-08

Summary:  Ready, one comment
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Comment: 
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(This comment was also in my Last Call review; I do not consider it
blocking, but the authors didn't respond yet.)

This document is clear and straightforward even without knowing all
the MPLS jargon. Thus, the following should not hold up the draft,
but a future reader might like to know *why* the restriction that this
document removes was imposed in the first place:

"In MPLS-TP, the GAL ... MUST NOT be used with PWs."

RFC 5586 doesn't explain this at all, so a sentence in the present draft
like "This restriction was originally imposed because ...." would be quite
informative. 
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