I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-salter-rfc5430bis-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20111022 IETF LC End Date: 20111031 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Status page 1: This Internet-Draft will expire on 2 April 2011. -> 2012 (don't fix the draft but the tool which gives this wrong date :-) - Toc page 2 and 6 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 4 page 7: ClientHellomessage -> ClientHello message - 9 page 12: extra white line in: A Transitional Suite B TLS system configured at a minimum level of security of 128 bits, MUST offer the TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA cipher suite and/or the TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA cipher suite in the ClientHello message. The TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA cipher suite is preferred, and if it is offered, it MUST appear before the TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA cipher suite (if present). - 9 page 13 (twice, last occurrences): TLS_ECHDE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA -> TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA Regards [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
