Please see attached review.
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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-fecframe-rtp-raptor-05.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2011-10-30 IETF LC End Date: 2011-11-03 IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-03 Summary: Ready (with nits) -------- Comments: --------- A large part of this draft consists of media type definitions which appear correct, and I assume they have been through the required expert review. I could not find any significant issues. Nits ---- Typo in page header title: RTP Payload Fromat for Raptor s/Fromat/Format/ I noticed several places where an upper-case MAY is used unnecessarily IMHO, and a plain English lower case "may" would be fine: - all three MAYs in the Introduction; - the first sentence of section 3; - all three MAYs in the last paragraph of the Security Conisderations.
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