Hi Roni, thank you for the review. Comments inline.
On 10/29/11 9:44 AM, Roni Even wrote:
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> Document: draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
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> Review Date: 2011–10–29
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> IETF LC End Date: 2011–10–20
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> IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3
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> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
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> I noticed that the example in section 3 is presented as XML but I did
> not see any text about adding the new kind to the relax NG schema.
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> “property-kind = element kind { element text { "individual" | "group" |
> "org" | "location" }* }”
RFC 6351 defines "property-kind" as follows:
###
property-kind = element kind {
element text { "individual" | "group" | "org" | "location" |
x-name | iana-token }*
}
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New values are supported by means of the "iana-token" construction. See
Section 6.1.4 of RFC 6350:
An iana-token. Additional values may be registered with IANA (see
Section 10.3.4). A new value's specification document MUST
specify which properties make sense for that new kind of vCard
and which do not.
Peter
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