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Document: draft-ietf-fecframe-config-signaling-06
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2011-11-02
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-03
Summary: Ready
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 4:
and optionally convey
to the application layer.
SHOULD BE:
and optionally convey this error
to the application layer.
more than one Media Senders.
SHOULD BE:
more than one Media Sender.
Section 5.1.1:
Note that SAP doesn't allow the time-interval to be signaled in
the SAP header. Hence, the usage of simpler method desires the
time-interval to be included in the FEC Framework Configuration
Information, if the default time interval (=60 seconds) for SAP
message repeations is not deemed enough. For example, the usage of
"r=" (repeat time) field in SDP to convey the time-interval value,
if SDP encoding format is used.
SHOULD BE:
Note that SAP doesn't allow the time-interval to be signaled in
the SAP header. Hence, the usage of the simpler method requires the
time-interval to be included in the FEC Framework Configuration
Information, if the default time interval (=60 seconds) for SAP
message repetitions is not used. For example, the usage of
"r=" (repeat time) field in SDP may convey the time-interval value,
if SDP encoding format is used.
Section 5.1.2:
which is (re)set to the five times
SHOULD BE:
which is (re)set to five times
Section 5.2:
The fact that two nodes desiring unicast communication almost always
rely on an application to first exchange the application related
parameters via the signaling protocol, it is logical to enhance such
signaling protocol(s) to
SHOULD BE:
The fact that two nodes desiring unicast communication almost always
rely on an application to first exchange the application related
parameters via the signaling protocol makes it logical to enhance such
signaling protocol(s) to
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