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Document: draft-ietf-6man-rpl-option-05
RPL Option for Carrying RPL Information in Data-Plane Datagrams
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 22-Nov-2011
IETF LC End Date: 31-Oct-2011
IESG Telechat date: 1-Dec-2011
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
RFC.
Major issues:
The major issue from earlier my review has been resolved.
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
While calling a bit the O bit does not appear unreasonable, I note
that when looking at the packet form, the difference between the O bit
and the mbz bits marked as 0 is small, and a likely source of confusion
for the reader.
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