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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-loss-episode-metrics-03
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2011-11-29
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-12-01
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 1.1:
the ratio v(t) \
a(t) of the variance v(t) and average a(t)
Should use a forward slash "/" instead of a backslash?
Section 2.4:
and that both packet were
received at Dst.
SHOULD BE:
and that both packets were
received at Dst.
Section 3.5:
and we
which to select
SHOULD BE:
and we
wish to select
Section 6.2:
Geometric Steam
SHOULD BE:
Geometric Stream
Section 7.1:
ype-P-One-way-Bi-
Packet-Loss-Geometric-Stream-Episode-Duration
SHOULD BE:
Type-P-One-way-Bi-
Packet-Loss-Geometric-Stream-Episode-Duration
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