Hi Chris, Thanks for the review.
These terms are from RFC-5213. The spec did point to the base specs. But, will ensure we add the references to those terms at first usage. I¹ll note this comment. Regards Sri On 1/16/12 6:14 AM, "Christer Holmberg" <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a > new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09 > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review Date: 16 January 2012 > IETF LC End Date: 17 January 2012 > IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012 > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that > should be fixed before publication. > > Major issues: - > > Minor issues: - > > Nits/editorial comments: > > - The document talks about mobile access gateways and local mobility anchors, > but I did not find any references to, and/or definitions of, those. > > Regards, > > Christer > >
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