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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-interworking-03.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2012-02-17
IETF LC End Date: 2012-02-23
IESG Telechat date: 2012-03-01
Summary: The document is ready for publication as an experimental RCFc.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- Section 5.2 describes a sequence of packet flows. I think it would be
easier to understand if there is a companion figure to which the text can
refer to. Otherwise, the reader has to compose this figure in his mind.
- Please expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: RLOC, CRIO
- Perhaps the terminology section should include RLOC, xTR, ETR, ITR, DFZ
- Idnits reveals a number of unused references: LIPS-MS, RFC4632,
LISP-DEPLOY, RFC4787, RFC5382. They should be deleted.
- Idnits reveals an obsolete reference: RFC 2434 (Obsoleted by RFC 5226)
- Idnits reveals a number of instances where IP addresses are not
compliant with RFC 5735. I am trying to identify which ones of these are.
I guess they are the 220.x.x.x, 128.x.x.x EIDs. I think most of them are
technically EIDs for LISP-NR, LISP-R LISP-NAT, etc. I don't know if RFC
5735 applies to this draft or not, I am just letting you know in case you
need to fix something.
BR,
Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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