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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.
Document:draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-09.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2012-02-24
IETF LC End Date: 2012-02-28
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- I have not reviewed Section 6 of this document, which is the actual MIB
structure, because there is nothing I can comment on it. Considering that
this draft has been produced in the ADSLMIB working group, I believe the
expertise lies in the WG.
- I've noticed in the data tracker that IANA has requested a
clarification with respect to the IANA Considerations section. The
resolution of this discussion should be documented in the IANA
Considerations section.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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