Pete,
Thanks. You're right re S.3.3.3.4.
Suggest delete/ (like the limited functionality option in Section 3.3.3.1)/
I also suggest the end of 3.3.3. needs to mention RFC6040, rather
than waiting until 3.3.3.4, which otherwise looks like an afterthought.
OLD 3.3.3:
=====================================================================
Two different modes are defined in [RFC3168]
for IP-in-IP tunnels and a third one in [RFC4301] for IP-in-IPsec
tunnels.
=====================================================================
NEW 3.3.3:
=====================================================================
Two different modes are defined in [RFC3168]
for IP-in-IP tunnels and a third one in [RFC4301] for IP-in-IPsec
tunnels. [RFC6040] updates both these RFCs to rationalise them into
one consistent approach.
=====================================================================
Agree that all identified nits need correcting.
Thanks again for your time on this.
Bob
At 04:33 29/02/2012, Pete McCann wrote:
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Document: draft-ietf-pcn-encoding-comparison-08
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2012-02-28
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2012-03-01
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
Section 3.3.3.4:
With the normal mode, the ECN field of the inner header is copied to
the ECN field of the outer header on encapsulation (like the limited
functionality option in Section 3.3.3.1).
The limited functionality option says to set the outer header to not-ECT.
This seems to contradict the above statement.
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 3.3.3.3:
full-
functionality option in Section 3.3.2.2.
I think you meant "Section 3.3.3.2". One other place in this
paragraph needs this correction.
Section 4.2:
The problem with 3-in-1 encoding is that the 10-codepoint does not
survive decapsulation with the tunneling options in Section 3.3.2.1 -
3.3.2.3.
Again, you meant 3.3.3.1 - 3.3.3.3
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