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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-packet-pw-03 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: March 13, 2012 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: March 15, 2012 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: In this model LSRs, LSR1 and LSR2, SHOULD BE: In this model LSR1 and LSR2 The PEs, PE1 and PE2 SHOULD BE: PE1 and PE2 used to transport all of the required layer 2 and layer 3 between protocols between LSR1 and LSR2. SHOULD BE: used to transport all of the required layer 2 and layer 3 protocols between LSR1 and LSR2. Section 3: client equipments will the follow normal practice SHOULD BE: client equipments will follow the normal practice Section 4: A better caption for figure 2 would be, "The internal structure of a PW PE with integrated client LSR" Section 5: The client network work layer packet encapsulation SHOULD BE: The client network layer packet encapsulation value lower Ethernet address SHOULD BE: lower value Ethernet address Appendix A: rational SHOULD BE: rationale no more that four SHOULD BE: no more than four
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