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Document: draft-ietf-marf-spf-reporting-10
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Mar-21-2012
IETF LC End Date: Mar-14-2012
IESG Telechat date: March-15-2012 (*** Sorry for the delay ***)
Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 0
Nits/editorial comments: 1
Nits:
- The referencing in this document seems odd. For example, normal
referencing would be:
As required by IANA [IANA-CONSIDERATIONS], ...
Here, the reference object is "IANA" and the reference is
"IANA-CONSIDERATIONS". xml2rfc creates a link from "IANA-
CONSIDERATIONS" to the References section.
However, this draft uses referencing as follows:
As required by [IANA-CONSIDERATIONS], ...
This essentially conflates the reference object ("IANA") with
the reference itself ("IANA-CONSIDERATIONS").
I suspect that this is a stylistic convention used by the authors,
so if they are happy with it then they can feel free to disregard
this comment.
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA)
Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / [email protected]
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