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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120321 IETF LC End Date: 20120320 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Not Ready Major issues: the wording of the document is too poor and can lead to confusion. The use of RFC 2119 key words is bad, in particular for MAYs. Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr PS: I'll send the full review as soon as I have the time. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
