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Document: draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-04.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2012-04-04
IETF LC End Date: 2012-04-12
IESG Review: 2012-04-12
Summary: The document is nearly ready for publication as an
Informational RFC (see one issue below)
Major issues: none
Minor issues:
This might be pedantic, but I think some of your Informational
references are actually Normative, because they are needed to understand
the document. See "IESG Statement: Normative and Informative References"
for more details
<http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/normative-informative.html>.
This almost doesn't matter for an Informational document, however if any
of 5 drafts becomes Normative, publication of this document as an RFC
will be delayed. Still, this might be better than just getting it
published with "work in progress" references.
But otherwise this is a well written document and I enjoyed reading it.
Nits/editorial comments: none
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