I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-policy-25.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2012/04/23 IESG Telechat date: 2012/04/26 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have some comments. Minor ===== * Section 7.2 "Rule Example with Geodetic Location Condition" refers to a location condition based on a polygon but the XML below refers to a location condition based on a circle. Can you please fix this inconsistency. * Section 13.2 It is unclear how this quotient (0.13) was calculated using the information provided in Section 6.5.2. Can you please clarify? The choices of 6.5.2 are such that this maximum leakage can be established: by any statistical procedures, without using geographic information (highways, etc. as discussed above), the quotient A1/A is larger than 0.13 (= 1/(5*1.5) ) Editorial ========= * Section 13.2 OLD: Whenever location information is returned to a location recipient then it contains the location of the Target. NEW: Whenever location information is returned to a location recipient it contains the location of the Target. OLD: However, even without the Target's movement there is danger to reveal information over time NEW: However, even without any Target movement there is a danger that more information may be revealed over time. OLD: informationa bout the Target. NEW: information about the Target. Thanks Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
