I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-sync-17 Reviewer: Wassim Haddad Review Date: 2012-04-24 IETF LC End Date: 2012-04-18 IESG Telechat date: 2012-04-26 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as experimental standard but some clarifications/re-writings would be helpful. Major issues: None Minor issues: - Perhaps I missed it somewhere in the document, but I could not find the meaning of "ESRPs" (page 5) - Suggest re-writing the last paragraph on page 8 - Suggest re-writing the 3-line paragraph on page 9 Regards, Wassim H. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
