Please see attached review.
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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-03.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2012-05-04 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-24 IESG Telechat date: 2012-05-10 Summary: Ready -------- Comments: --------- My Last Call comments have been addressed, and the document now reads more logically, due to material being moved to the appendices. Nit: ---- There is duplicated text in section 1.2: be managed using tools with similar look and feel. The requirements specifications [RFC5654] and [RFC5860] specifications [RFC5654] and [RFC5860] capture the essential issues that must be resolved to allow
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