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Document: draft-ietf-roll-minrank-hysteresis-of-10.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2012-05-08
IESG Telechat date: 2012-05-10
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
I reviewed version -07 of this document. At that time, I had a few
editorial comments, and all of them but one have been addressed in
version -10. The comment that has not been address is included here again
for your consideration:
- Section 3.1. Towards the end of the section, the sentence reads:
The path cost corresponding to a neighbor SHOULD be re-computed each
time:
and then there are 3 conditions numbered from 1 to 3. It is not clear if
the path cost should be recomputed when all of the 3 conditions are met,
or when any of the 3 conditions are met. In other words, it is not clear
if the 3 bullet points are an "AND" or an "OR" operation among then.
Presumably they are an "OR". If this is the case, perhaps the sentence
should be rephrased as:
The path cost corresponding to a neighbor SHOULD be re-computed each
time any of the following conditions are met:
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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