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Document: draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-01.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2012/06/07
IESG Telechat date: 2012/06/05
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
but I have a comment.
Minor
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* Introduction:
The first sentence is too complex and very difficult to parse. Please
consider breaking it up. I have proposed some changed text, but feel
free to ignore if it changes the meaning of what you wanted to convey.
OLD:
IODEF extensions via class extension through AdditionalData and
RecordItem elements, as per section 5.2 of [RFC5070], generally
register their namespaces and schemas with the IANA XML Namespace
registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/ns.html and
the IANA XML Schema registry at
http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/schema.html,
respectively [RFC3688].
NEW:
The classes of the IODEF data model can be extended by the use of
AdditionalData and RecordItem elements, as per section 5.2 of [RFC5070].
IODEF extensions that use such extended classes register their
namespaces and schemas with the IANA XML Namespace
registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/ns.html and
the IANA XML Schema registry at
http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/schema.html,
respectively [RFC3688].
Thanks
Suresh
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