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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-6man-lineid-05 Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty Review Date: June 19, 2012 IETF LC End Date: June 18, 2012 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This document is read for publication. I only found one tiny nit on acronyms noted below. Abstract: In Ethernet based aggregation networks, several subscriber premises may be logically connected to the same interface of an edge router. This document proposes a method for the edge router to identify the subscriber premises using the contents of the received Router Solicitation messages. The applicability is limited to broadband network deployment scenarios where multiple user ports are mapped to the same virtual interface on the Edge Router. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Figure 1: Some of the acronyms used in the diagram are not expanded upon in the introduction section, RG for instance (it is in the terminology section, but is the only acronym not spelled out near figure 1). It may also be confusing to see AN for Access Node next to Aggregation Network. It may help to expand AN? It is in the Introduction, so not a big deal.
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