Hi Meral, On Tue, Jul 3, 2012 at 12:18 PM, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a > new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2012-07-03 > IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-20 > IESG Telechat date: 2012-07-05 > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I > have some last editorial comments. > > Major issues: > -none > > Minor issues: > -none > > Nits/editorial comments: > -Consistency with RFC6325, [Page 18], below the table, "end station service > disable bit" --missing dash--> "end-station service disable bit"
OK. > -Consistency: Acronyms are usually spelled out, then followed by the acronym > in parenthesis [when first used]. On few occasions this has been reversed, > ex. check for: > "EISS (Enhanced Internal Sublayer Service)", "DRB (Designated RBridge)" vs > "Reverse Path Forwarding Check (RPFC)" OK. I think acronym followed by spelling out in parenthesis is probably best for uniform format. > -Informative References, Ref. [802], please if you get a chance verify again > the date of this document :) > I checked again on the version freely available at > http://standards.ieee.org/about/get/802/802.html, it says "7 February, 2002". > I could not find anything dated "8 March, 2002". IEEE 802 distributes a CD of all of its standards to all of its active members (I believe to all the voting members of all of its working groups) each year in November. (Actually, they are physically handed out at the November 802 plenary meeting but if you qualify you can pick it up at a later meeting if you don't attend the November meeting or forget to pick it up there.) Under separate cover, I will send to you the pdf for IEEE Std 802-2001 from the CD that was distributed to me in November 2011. It says 8 March 2002 on the title page (and "Approved 6 December 2001" on the next page). Thanks, Donald ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA [email protected] > Thanks, > Meral > > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
