I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-farrell-decade-ni-07/08.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120704 IETF LC End Date: 20120702 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: there were some issues raised in the mailing list but solved (?) in the last version (I reviewed an intermediate 07-08 version, last is 09 today). Minor issues: (not technical) more than 5 authors Nits/editorial comments: - Toc and 11 page 18: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments (i.e., American English vs. GB one) - 1 page 4, 3 page 8, 9.4 page 15: e.g. -> e.g., - 4 page 9, 7 page 11: i.e. -> i.e., Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
