On 8/13/12 4:17 AM, Francis Dupont wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> .
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20120810
IETF LC End Date: 20120813
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
- a very minor question: why in the search syntax is there no "NOT" operator,
only "AND" and "OR"?
I can add NOT to that list.
- annoying edition bug in 2.6
Are you pointing to the last bulleted item in that section being on the
next page, or something else?
Nits/editorial comments:
Thanks for these.
- ToC page 2 and 6 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
- 1 page 3 and 2.1 page 4: capabilites -> capabilities
- 2.1 page 4: occuring -> occurring
- 2.6 page 7: please remove the last item, i.e.:
o The system must allow the administrator to delete messages from an
archived list
which is already specified by the previous one, i.e.:
o The system must allow the administrator to add messages to and
delete messages from an archived list. The system should log such
actions.
Regards
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